标题:People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face .What are the effects of this on an individual and society as a whole.

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On the backdrop background of social transformation, virtual communication has aroused the public attention these days .What this essay will focus on is its effects.

From the social angle, technological communication impose imposes positive impacts on national development. The first to note is that it can generate enormous profits for the state on the grounds that it is the facilitator of productivity. That is to say, the (单数可数名词不能单独使用) transaction through computers enhance enhances efficiency in work. What is more, virtual communication stimulates the public interest in technology research and propel scientific studies .Meanwhile, it catalyze the emergency of the advanced technologies. Admittedly, high technology serves as the foundation of the national development.

From individual angle, the transaction by computers exerts negative effect on human lifes lives. Firstly, it develops a sedentary lifestyle for the simple reason that people spend too much time in front of screen .The sedentary lifestyle is the main contributor to lifestyle-related disease, such as slipped discs, spinal diseases and even some terminal disease. Furthermore, it reduce the opportunities of getting in touch with other people and result in some psychologically disease. However, these problems above can be solved by participating in more outdoor and face-to-face activities. And it is common belief that technological communication brings considerable convenience to the public life

In terms of the statements identified above, I am in accordance with the perspective that technological communication benefits individual and society a lot.