标题:Some people think the government should increase the sports facilities to solve the public health problems. However, others think that other measures should be taken to help resolve this problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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With the universalization prevalence of high-tech and convenient transpotations transportation in contemporary society, whatever（中式翻译） both the younger generation or and the older generation has have become to more fond of using high-tech products to achieve what they want than they used to be, and their physical quality is dropping day by day. What How（代词错误） on earth to solve this prevalent phenomenon deserves the government's analysis and consideration.
Some people firmly believe that it is the（that使用重复） increasing of the sports facilities that can resolve this phenomenon problem. Above all, the modernization of products has made it impossible for the ever-increasing improvement of public health to keep pace with the development of economy and living standard. Therefore, as the leader of a country and in order to get an improvement on this problem, the government ought to invest more material and financial resources into the sectors for people's physical quality. For, for（for instance后面是名词，不能单独构成一句话） instance, the establishment of a stadium、 , (标点错误)a gym or a football field is absolutely a great encouragement for them.
Others hold that other measures also should be taken for this problem (抄题部分不算字数). First of all, as the backbone of the country's future, adolescents' physical fitness should draw the governments worldwide attention. Admittedly, offering a wide range of physical exercises which based on scientific instructions will be an excellent means of fitness improving. After all, only those with abundant knowledge and robust physique can be competent for the development of the country. Subsequently, technology is also a good idea to count on. By researching and producing a new kind of traffic transpotation transportation, people on the way to work or to school will get an opportunity to exercise themselves in the future. （这段内容有些离题，没有说明除了“增加运动设施”之外政府还有哪些“其他措施”用于提高公共健康）
As for me, there are also many other measures for the government to take for helping cope this problem, such as holding more competitions concerning exercise, and organizing the health promotion activities .However, solving the problems on public health are not only the obligation of the government, but everyone should take their own health into account, too （not only后面是名词，but also后面也应该用词而不是句子与之并列，而且这句话内容好像和主题无关）. By In this way, the public health problems can be resolved efficiently.
