[MS8]come up for sth be considered as an applicant or a candidate for sth 作某事的申请人或候选人：She comes up for re-election next year. 在明年的重选中她参加竞选。
Show up / turn up 都可以的
[MS9]前面用过了，避免重复用promotly / instantly 都可以的
[MS10]时态错误，应改为一般现在时
[MS11]And前后不是很对称，应改为refreshment
[MS12]Here punctuation is used inaccurately.
[MS13]这里语法很乱，改为原型，和前面的able to do 平列好些。
[MS14]应该为因果关系
[MS15]改为 compared to
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