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    二. 观点+展望:

 

    2种结尾的思路即将回顾全文部分省略,直接表达观点和意图。这种结尾方式比较适合于纯单边支持的作文,以下我们来看几个例子:

 

    It is obvious difficult to restrict the movement of people around the world and it is probably foolish to try to stop it. But attempts should be made to redress the imbalance.

 

    关于人才流失的话题,作者在结尾一上来就表达了自己的立场,即无法阻止这个现象。但是进而又对改变这个状况做了期待。我们来对比另外一个例子:

 

    All in all, the problem of world poverty cannot be solved by money alone. Nations need to work together on long-term projects, sharing their knowledge and skills so that each person has something valuable to offer their community.

 

    在分析解决型题材的结尾中也可以采用这种2要素的结尾方式,如果最后所剩时间不是很充分的前提下,省略对全文的回顾而直接表达观点也是一种明智的决定。

 

    To conclude, it is clear that although numbers of women in the workforce have increased, they are still disadvantaged because they generally put the welfare of others, particularly the family, above financial ambition or promotion.

 

    上面例子中,我们发现,其实展望未来这个部分,也可以写成解释原因,因为不是每个题目到最后都能想出一个合适的未来让你展望的,那么这个时候我们不妨把思路切换成对观点的原因解释,也未尝不是一个好主意。我们再来看看这个例子:

 

    To sum up, the richer nations have helped a lot by providing money for poor countries and poorer countries need to not only spend the money for daily use, but also put more money on economic developments, human resource improvements and education advancements, because only by doing so can they change their poor situations.

 

 

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