There is no denying the fact that medical expenses and difficult threatment is a grave problem with which our country are confronted in the present situation. Complaints are often heard from the people aroud us that they couldn’t pay for the medical cost. They are hard to have an appointment with a doctor in large hospital, because the doctor’s appointment is arranged fully. Acually, the problem has become so widepread that it has severely affected people’s live.

　　A number of factors account for the problem, but the leading reason might be inadequate medical care system and poor medical care environment. The hospital is a profit structure. They must try their best to earning the money to maintain the operation of hospitals. The absence of reasonable charges for medical care system will result in increasing cost. On the other hand, people flock to large hospital because of the lack of medical resources.

　　In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that laws and regulaiongs be worked out and enforced to bind the doctor’s medical behavior. Secondly, the relevant government departments should allocate medical resources appropriately. With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be soleved in the near future.

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