The execution of health care reform was not successful in our country since the 90s of the 20th century, and many problems of medical care emerged in recent years. For example, people complained that it is difficult to see the doctor and the medical expense is too high. Some peasants or the poor who be ill had to choose death.

　　The cause of these problems is complex. Firstly, the resourse of health are concentrated to big city, the doctors and medicine at countryside and grass-roots unit are shortage. Secondly, in order to reduce the burdens of the country, the hospital has been marketed. Thirdly, the sale links of medicine are too complicated, which lead to the price of the medicine increasing.

　　How to resolve these problems effectively? On the one hand, the government must increase the inputs in the health medical care, and the hospital must return the public benefit. On the other hand, we should try hard to increase the income of the resident, especial of the peasant. Finally, we should make medical insurance covering the entire population of our country.

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