At present ,China  there is a high medical expenses and medical care difficult problem.We often hear that a family because of a sick family member in need of assistance not afford to buy  drugs and to see a doctor.

　　The first reason for these problems is majorier of the chinese people have no medical  insurance. Some malignant diseases or long—term chromic diease,medical costs are fully borne by households often leaves the family impoverished by hospitalization. The second reason is that the proportion of people to doctor is too low.

　　In our opinion, the fundamental measure is to allow everyone health insurance. In this  way ,those  who suffer from the malignant dieases and patients with long–term chronic dieases will greatlly reduce the burden on the family. Then we should add the mumber of hospital and doctor. the last one is that different disease will go to different  hospital  .A minor defect  should go to a community hospital, while the difficult cases go to high–level hospital.

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　　1. 语言基本功不扎实，稍微复杂一点的表达就会出现错误。需要温习一下句法。

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